A little teaser for the Writer’s Workshop I am hosting beginning next Saturday at godoggocafe.com…
Hope you will all join me there!
First Draft
I wanted to take this opportunity to invite you all to join me Saturday of next week as we start the Writer’s Workshop at Go Dog Go Café. Get your pencils and your prose ready and come prepared to be challenged and have fun.
(44 words. Never start with “I” and every knows this is the Go Dog Go Café. Needs tightening. I am cringing reading it out loud. Never a good sign.)
First Rewrite
Join me on Saturday of next week for challenging fun as the Writer’s Workshop is kicked off here in the cafe with the inaugural prompt. Don’t forget to sharpen your pencils and be prepared to sharpen your prose.
(38 words. Starts with “you”…better, but still clunky. Needs stronger verbals. “Kick off” is a mixed metaphor…we have a baseball theme. “Inaugural” is wrong imagery…feels political. Passive tense “is kicked off” should be changed to…
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So very happy to have you at the Cafe! This is going to be amazing!
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Thank you for keeping after me and providing the opportunity! I am eager to get started! 😘
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🤓🙏🙌👍🙌👍🙌🙏🤓
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Wish I was closer!
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Hi, Jane! We are doing it remotely through the comment section. We would love to have your participation! ❤️
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Hi. I would love to participate. I will read more carefully and I’ll be there. What a great idea!
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You made my night! 💖
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Great writing comes from great re-writing no doubt. Great post, Tanya!
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Thank you, Parker! It definitely does. I have heard it said that the first draft is for the writer and the re-writes are for everyone else. I like that way of thinking about it.
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