moon, mutable orb

pitch ceaselessly waxes, wanes

tides ever tuning

~

I love to revisit old work and see what I might tease from it. Is this an improvement or something entirely new? I’ll let you decide. The original:

A Lunar Haiku

light, vacillating

orb waxes, fills, wanes, renews

still, daily moves tides

~

Play on, fellow wordsmiths.

~ Tanya

as always: photo and words©️2024 Tanya Cliff